DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Mr. Palonia said that there are some athletes on this team that believe that no one should have any practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project--the ones doing the experiment, new lab equipment.

DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Darnel doesn't have any reason to question the instructions but he does want an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term
Olga and I went downtown; we went to buy new notebooks that we need for class and for long term keeping.

DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Yes, Terri won the game but we ddn't know she had.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us members, was the end of the project before we were able to finish.

DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
You should have heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Regardless of what grandpa says, it would be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.

DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Rob commented that our neighbors have to welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Because neither Ben nor I had not read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word 'chide.'

DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard, I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
The race among the three relay teams are close; none of the three teams however are giving up hope of winning.

DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free- electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did."
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.

DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Our social studies teacher asked us, to write reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.

DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants you to help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me for more information."

DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Having read the novel "The Man in the Iron Mask," I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
There were so many things to do that I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer, or go to my friend's concert.

DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country

Mr. Guarino told us that the 24th Corps, who were assigned to Germany after World War II helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket back to United States.

DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia

"I reviewed the book well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
"Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be alright," Pedro noted.

DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away

He was unable to attend our 15th high-school reunion; he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
It saids that regardless of the effect of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.

DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
You should have followed the three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and lastly, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Although my dog is different from yours, we will have no problem walking them together.

DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.

DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Walking quietly along the road, I wasn't able to see that speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
After the race begins, Delia took these medals to the track club at the school east from here.

DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
"Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
She was quite young - no more than twenty-six - when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Yes, they are going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless, of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Because it snowed hevily last night do its all right if no one comes to the basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.

DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
"In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated